Hope Maseko

To be honest, the book started ok but later became shallow. There is no suspense it is too fast and just predictable. Writer lacks depth and maturity and creativeness. I suggest you read from other good writers like Val Sims and u will understand what I mean. Take the criticism positively so u can improve, story line was great but poorly written, even the grammar and broken english. When u have written a better one after research kindly let me know I would still want to read and see a change