Karla Sanders
this is hard to read. The mix-up with he, she, son and daughter, it makes it hard to follow the storyline. It started off good, but will not continue to read and will not pay to read a lot of confusion in the characters.
2023-03-24 06:54:15
Queen Ponzy
You see you have no followers. No one will ever follow the work of a person who supports women getting abused.
2023-03-21 20:40:51
YMo
You so stupid and pathetic
2023-03-21 09:10:56Bernardita_54
Kainis huh? So frustrating I’m getting fed up with your grammar. I really don’t like the story but I’m hoping it will improve like for her to stop crying. What a weak character, dumb and idiot. What are you? A saint? A martyr? Oh you love yourself to be punched? Don’t be cruel to yourself girl. To the author: don’t make women look like punching bags.
2023-03-20 03:31:59
Sherry Amore
The grammar is terrible yet expensive.
2023-03-19 11:14:04
Meng Refugio_2
I stopped reading this !!! A mother calling her daughter "son"??? so many lapses !!! Make it worth reading nxt time !!!
2023-03-18 16:32:38Meng Refugio_2
Be careful with ur pronouns ! U are calling a "he" for females and vice versa ...It's so confusing... It's poorly written though the storyline is somewhat ok !
2023-03-18 16:08:27
Shanak
Your grammar was sooo bad that you don’t even know how to distinguish the gender of your characters.... daughter is anak na babae and son is anak na lalaki.... please correct your grammars and use the correct description to describe something!
2023-03-16 16:15:16
Etha khumalo
loved the story line but its terribly written what a shame I would have loved reading it
2023-03-15 02:33:39
Secrecy theory
mam you need a proofreader.
2023-09-09 21:16:13
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